Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Who's that girl?

There once was a girl from Shotley
Who typed up some words quite promptly
With thoughts in her mind
And a heart that was kind
She lived to be old and happy.

4 comments:

  1. Forgive me, but I think you have a typo. Or are rhythm-ly challenged. :)

    At least you are original. The rest of us steal poetry.

    "There once was a girl from Shotley
    Who Geordiely dressed rather motley
    With thoughts in her mind
    And a heart that was kind
    She bounced when she walked, rather hotly."

    :) :) :)

    Shotley Bridge. I see.

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  2. Its the first poem i've ever written, and when you say it out loud with a geordie accent it has one.

    But I like your version :)

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    1. Maybe not ever written, but certainly the first one I've written since I stopped having to write them in English classes at school. I have to admit my English teach probably wouldn't be very impressed with that one.

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