Joy in looking and comprehending is nature's most beautiful gift.
- Albert Einstein
Forgive me, but I think you have a typo. Or are rhythm-ly challenged. :)At least you are original. The rest of us steal poetry."There once was a girl from ShotleyWho Geordiely dressed rather motleyWith thoughts in her mindAnd a heart that was kindShe bounced when she walked, rather hotly.":) :) :)Shotley Bridge. I see.
Its the first poem i've ever written, and when you say it out loud with a geordie accent it has one.But I like your version :)
Maybe not ever written, but certainly the first one I've written since I stopped having to write them in English classes at school. I have to admit my English teach probably wouldn't be very impressed with that one.
By "one" I mean rhythm.
Go on, you know you want to...